Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marriage
is a special and important event in your Use synonyms
life
and some individuals believe that a couple should have a minimum Use synonyms
age
of 21 before they can legally marry each other. It is believed that it is right to postpone Use synonyms
marriage
to the Use synonyms
age
of 21 Use synonyms
instead
of the current 18 years of Linking Words
age
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This
essay will give 2 reasons why Linking Words
people
should not commit to each other for the law until they are 21 years old.
First of all, at the Use synonyms
age
of 21, Use synonyms
people
have more Use synonyms
life
experience and are more capable of making major decisions in Use synonyms
life
. It is said that the majority of 21-year-olds have lived on their own and are able to look after themselves compared to younger Use synonyms
people
who are dependent on their parents. Use synonyms
For example
, students who live alone need to be able to cook their own meals and know how to pay their own rent. Linking Words
This
gives them more Linking Words
life
experience.
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Secondly
, the amount of Linking Words
people
who have a full-time job has increased by the Use synonyms
age
of 21, and will Use synonyms
therefore
have more financial stability. If a person is economically independent, it has a better capability to look after themselves and their partner and Linking Words
therefore
more able to maintain the relationship. Linking Words
For instance
, financial independence will decrease the pressure on a partnership, and it will increase higher chances of success in the future.
In conclusion, 21-year-olds have more Linking Words
life
experience and are more likely to be economically independent. Use synonyms
This
will increase the odds of a successful young Linking Words
marriage
. I personally believe that it is important to legalize Use synonyms
marriage
from the Use synonyms
age
of 21.Use synonyms
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