the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The presented graph depicts data about the proportion of
shops
that opened and closed between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, it is evident that the number
of shop closures and openings during the period fluctuated. The number
of shops
opened experienced the biggest fall in 2011, dropping significantly by 50% from 8500 to 4000 openings whereas
the number
of shop closures fell the biggest in 2015, reaching 500 closures.
Upon taking a closer examination, it is observed that the number
of new shops
opened experienced 3 decline periods: 2011 to 2012, 2014 to 2015, and 2017 to 2018. Furthermore
, the data shows that from 2012 to 2014, the number
of shops
newly opened increased gradually from approximately 4000 to 6000.
As observed in detail, the number
of shops
opened was higher than the number
of shops
closured
in 2011 at 8500. Correct your spelling
closed
However
, at the end
of the period, the number
of shops
that closed surpassed it at 5000.Submitted by helma.devina on
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