The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line
chart
below compares the fluctuation of using three different electrical based
instruments and Add a hyphen
electrical-based
amount
of weekly spending time for household Correct article usage
the amount
managment
per hour Correct your spelling
management
since
1920 to 2019.
In the first diagram, Change preposition
from
usage
of either washing machine or
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apply
refrigerator
or vacuum
cleaner experienced dramatically
increasing Correct article usage
a dramatically
trend
of appliance usage
from total
of 100% and eventually both Add an article
a total
the total
refrigerator
and vacuum
cleaners' usage
rate
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rates
touch
the peak of popularity.In Wrong verb form
touched
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the seconad
seconad
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second
chart
, as it
can observed people Correct pronoun usage
apply
tends
to Correct subject-verb agreement
tend
spent
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spend
less
weekly Correct quantifier usage
fewer
hours
for
doing housework Change preposition
apply
by
a significant descending Change preposition
with
trend
.
In 1920, people almost did not use refrigerators at all But washing maching
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machine
usage
was the most popular one also
vacuum
cleaner was the second in popularity
with Replace the word
popular
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a number
the number
number of
40 per Correct quantifier usage
apply
cent
and 30 per cent
respectively.it worth
mentioning that Add a missing verb
is worth
refrigerator
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the refrigerator
consumtion
rate Correct your spelling
consumption
reach
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reached
bottom
to Correct article usage
the bottom
top
quickly, in Add an article
the top
other hand
all the three houseworks' instruments show Change the wording
another hand
other hands
significant
increase and higher growing Add an article
a significant
the significant
trend
of refigerators'
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refrigerators
usage
made two Change the article
the breakout
breakout
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breakouts
aroud
year of 1940 and Correct your spelling
around
number
of almost 60 per cent
.Finally
both ownership ofAdd a comma
Finally,
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refrigerators
refrigerator
and vacuum
cleaners touch the highest number
at
Change preposition
in
chart
but the peak Add an article
the chart
of
washing Change preposition
for
machine
was Fix the agreement mistake
machines
a
75 per Correct article usage
apply
cent
.
In one line chart
of second shown charts the number
of weekly usage
of three mentioned appliances as housework tools started with number
of 50 Change the article
a number
the number
hours
, but with a decreasing trend
of houseworking
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house working
housework
hours
between 1920 to 1960 average of houseworkings'
time reach to 10 Correct your spelling
housewarmings
hours
per week and with a steady trend
ends with 10 hours
in 2019.Submitted by hedoyeraisy on
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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