The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#tables #information #temperatures #hours #daylight #london #sydney #weekend #december #summarise #features #comparisons
The tables show the differences in maximum and minimum
temperature
, as well the
daylight Correct word choice
as the
hours
during Correct article usage
the
a
weekend Correct article usage
the
Change preposition
in
of
December in London and Change preposition
in
Sydney
.
Overall
, during the three days
the daylight Add a comma
days,
time
did not change significantly in each place, and the temperature
variations during the weekend were minimum
. Correct word choice
minimal
However
, the difference of
Change preposition
in
temperature
and light hours
were
pretty different between the two cities.
In London, there were found significant changes related to the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
temperature
or the sunrise and sunset time
. The maximum temperature
during those three days vwas
13Correct your spelling
was
˚C
, while
the minimum was 3˚C
. The main sunrise time
in that weekend was 08:06, whilst the general sunset time
was around 15:58. In the case of Sydney
, the variation in maximum temperature
steadily increased from 26 ˚C and 31˚C
, and the minimum temperature
grew from 17˚C
to 19˚C
. There was also
an upward tendency related to the hours
of daylight, however
the variation was just 1 minute of difference.
Considering both tables, it can be said that there was a warmer time
in Sydney
with almost twice the temperature
than the in London. While
in Lonndon the sky was lighted for almost 8 hours
, the light hours
in Sydney
were more than 12 hours
.Submitted by jennifergamboa254 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, hours, sydney, time, ˚c with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
▼