The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables show the differences in maximum and minimum
temperature
, as well
the
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as the
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daylight
hours
during
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the
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a
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the
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weekend
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in
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of
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in
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December in London and
Sydney
.
Overall
, during the three
days
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days,
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the daylight
time
did not change significantly in each place, and the
temperature
variations during the weekend were
minimum
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minimal
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.
However
, the difference
of
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in
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temperature
and light
hours
were
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was
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pretty different between the two cities. In London, there were found significant changes related to the
temperature
or the sunrise and sunset
time
. The maximum
temperature
during those three days
vwas
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was
13
˚C
,
while
the minimum was 3
˚C
. The main sunrise
time
in that weekend was 08:06, whilst the general sunset
time
was around 15:58. In the case of
Sydney
, the variation in maximum
temperature
steadily increased from 26 ˚C and 31
˚C
, and the minimum
temperature
grew from 17
˚C
to 19
˚C
. There was
also
an upward tendency related to the
hours
of daylight,
however
the variation was just 1 minute of difference. Considering both tables, it can be said that there was a warmer
time
in
Sydney
with almost twice the
temperature
than the in London.
While
in Lonndon the sky was lighted for almost 8
hours
, the light
hours
in
Sydney
were more than 12
hours
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, hours, sydney, time, ˚c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • comparison
  • London
  • Sydney
  • December 2018
  • weekend
  • information
  • data
  • summarise
  • select
  • report
  • features
  • analysis
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