The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables show the differences in maximum and minimum
temperature
, as well Use synonyms
the
daylight Correct word choice
as the
hours
during Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the
a
weekend Correct article usage
the
Change preposition
in
of
December in London and Change preposition
in
Sydney
.
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Overall
, during the three Linking Words
days
the daylight Add a comma
days,
time
did not change significantly in each place, and the Use synonyms
temperature
variations during the weekend were Use synonyms
minimum
. Correct word choice
minimal
However
, the difference Linking Words
of
Change preposition
in
temperature
and light Use synonyms
hours
Use synonyms
were
pretty different between the two cities.
In London, there were found significant changes related to the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
temperature
or the sunrise and sunset Use synonyms
time
. The maximum Use synonyms
temperature
during those three days Use synonyms
vwas
13Correct your spelling
was
˚C
, Use synonyms
while
the minimum was 3Linking Words
˚C
. The main sunrise Use synonyms
time
in that weekend was 08:06, whilst the general sunset Use synonyms
time
was around 15:58. In the case of Use synonyms
Sydney
, the variation in maximum Use synonyms
temperature
steadily increased from 26 ˚C and 31Use synonyms
˚C
, and the minimum Use synonyms
temperature
grew from 17Use synonyms
˚C
to 19Use synonyms
˚C
. There was Use synonyms
also
an upward tendency related to the Linking Words
hours
of daylight, Use synonyms
however
the variation was just 1 minute of difference.
Considering both tables, it can be said that there was a warmer Linking Words
time
in Use synonyms
Sydney
with almost twice the Use synonyms
temperature
than the in London. Use synonyms
While
in Lonndon the sky was lighted for almost 8 Linking Words
hours
, the light Use synonyms
hours
in Use synonyms
Sydney
were more than 12 Use synonyms
hours
.Use synonyms
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