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Nowadays many people choose to be self-emplpyed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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In
this
 advanced era, numerous individuals prefer to be independent and be their own boss
instead
 of working for an agency or a company. In
this
 essay, I will discuss
this
 matter, what exactly the reason is, and what the flaws and weak points of it are. On the one hand,
it is clear that
 many
people
 dream and want to make a name for themselves, specifically youth, and the purpose of dreaming of
such
 a thing lies between the feeling of satisfaction and letting the whole world know about them.
For example
, a bunch of
people
 now on social media are trying to be influencers and try to achieve more and more to make a profit.
Moreover
, most of the population prefers to work and gain interests that only belong to themselves.
For instance
,
usually
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 we find two partners or more owing an organization and working on it together, but that’s not the case for self-employed
people
; they refuse and hate to
have
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share
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 their business
shared
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with other
people
, and sometimes the motive for
this
 situation can account for the discomfort and not liking to communicate with others.
On the other hand
, as much as self-employment can be comfortable and easy, it actually has a lot of disadvantages.
Firstly
, dealing with high costs and a small profit at the beginning.
Secondly
, not maintaining a healthy work-life balance.
Thirdly
, not
knowing
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 how to handle big clients. To illustrate, newbie self-employees may not comprehend the
client
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 requirements.
To conclude
, self-employed workers start their own
business
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businesses
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 to gain freedom over their own ideas and work, and
while
 self-employment has pros, it has cons as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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