The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres or route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres or route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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The table illustrates the information
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underground railway systems in six big cities all around the world.
Overall
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, the train
system
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with the highest number of
kilometers
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kilometres
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of
route
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the route
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is owned by London.
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, Kyoto has the lowest figures
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annual
passengers
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. The underground railway
system
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of London has the highest number of
kilometers
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of route, which
supported
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by the fact that it is the oldest one among the other cities. On the other side, the smallest amount of route distance can be found in Kyoto’s train
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, reaching only 11
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. It is
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the second youngest infrastructure compared to the ones located in the other cities. The lowest figures
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annual
passengers
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contributed by Kyoto’s railway
system
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, where there are 45
millions
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million
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passengers
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per year.
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, the train
system
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of Tokyo is the most crowded one. There are 1.928
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passengers
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in
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average who use
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facility annually.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words system, passengers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway system
  • chronologically
  • significance
  • correlation
  • discrepancies
  • outliers
  • extensive network
  • limited network
  • urban sprawl
  • efficiency
  • hypothesize
  • passenger numbers
  • kilometres of route
  • date opened
  • major cities
  • data analysis
  • comparative analysis
  • historical context
  • speculate
  • potential causes
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