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Nowadays, the gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider in some countries of the world. What problems can this situation cause? What solutions should be taken?

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With the progress of
society
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, the wealth gap around the world is
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 widening, which
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 brings some problems. The following article will analyze the problems brought about by
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 phenomenon from two aspects:
education
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 and
economy
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the economy
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, and list some possible solutions.
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, the increasing wealth gap is likely to lead to a decline in social
education
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 levels, as the distribution of educational
resources
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 may become imbalanced. More specifically, wealthy individuals with more economic strength will seize more excellent educational
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,
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 as teachers and teaching equipment.
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, poor people without these
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 will prioritize solving their survival problems
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 insufficient economic strength, rather than caring about
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, and fall into a dead cycle of educational difficulties.
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, the majority of people in
society
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 who are unable to receive
education
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 will lower their
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education
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 level.
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, the socio-economic downturn will
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 be caused by the increasing wealth gap.
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,
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 the low level of
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 in the entire
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, talents will be concentrated in a few affluent groups,
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 more talents cannot be discovered, resulting in insufficient innovation ability in the entire
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 and the inability to achieve sustainable economic development.
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, the factors of economic production will
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 be controlled by the wealthy, making it impossible for the poor to create more economy.
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, the
overall
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 socio-economic situation will
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 experience a decline. As for solutions, primarily, the government should address
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 issue by reforming tax policies.
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, implementing a tiered tax system that applies higher percentages of taxes to high-income groups.
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more reasonable reforms should be carried out in the allocation of
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, and wealthy groups should not have access to more
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 or even monopolies.
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, provide corresponding
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 and economic training to the impoverished population so that they can find jobs.
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