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Population
in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties
that Correct your spelling
increased
increase
incresed
in Correct your spelling
increased
population
between 1940 and 2000, Columbia
, Yamhill
and Washington
had shown the
different increasing.
The population
of Columbia
had risen to just under 36,000 by 1970. Although
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Yamhill
. Between 1940
and 1970, Yamhills
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Yamhill's
populaton
rose from 30,000 to 45,000. Correct your spelling
population
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increase
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Washington
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Washington
population
had increased by
approximately 75,000, to 125,000 in 1940.
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Washington
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gratest
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greatest
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the Columbia
and
Yamhill
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population
between 1940 and 1970.
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counties
increase
by approximately the same amounts. They are
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