The maps below shows the developments which took place at the seaside resort of da Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

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the developments which took place at the seaside resort of da Templeton between 1990 and 2005. In general, a comparison of the two maps reveals a difference from a largely rural to a mainly urban area. In 1990, the town was

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greener residential area with a large number of trees and individual houses, but during the next 15

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the seaside experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees south-west and south-east of the town were cut down,with all houses along the

railway

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line being knocked down and replaced by

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of flats.

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, a new industrial estate with

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, ferry and supermarket sprang up around the seaside. Only a few trees north-west of the coast remained. The woodland was cleared to make way for a

railway

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station.

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developments were the facilities of an airport near the

north-west

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corner of the school and a new

railway

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line along the seaside. A ferry was

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appeared near the

railway

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station.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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The maps below shows the developments which took place at the seaside resort of da Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to five all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

some people think that children should be encouraged to play outdoor games that require physical activities instead of playing computer games at home. Do you agree or disagree?