The maps below shows the developments which took place at the seaside resort of da Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The maps below shows the developments which took place at the seaside resort of da Templeton between 1990 and 2005.
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the developments which took place at the seaside resort of da Templeton between 1990 and 2005. In general, a comparison of the two maps reveals a difference from a largely rural to a mainly urban area. In 1990, the town was
much
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greener residential area with a large number of trees and individual houses, but during the next 15
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the seaside experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees south-west and south-east of the town were cut down,with all houses along the
railway
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line being knocked down and replaced by
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of flats.
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, a new industrial estate with
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, ferry and supermarket sprang up around the seaside. Only a few trees north-west of the coast remained. The woodland was cleared to make way for a
railway
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station.
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developments were the facilities of an airport near the
north-west
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corner of the school and a new
railway
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line along the seaside. A ferry was
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appeared near the
railway
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station.
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