People living in the 21st century have a better life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Quality of living is one of the main focus in today's society. There is an opinion that

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's current quality of living is better compared to

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living in past centuries. I moderately agree with

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essay. Medical advancement has enabled humans to achieve wonders

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to the past. In terms of development in the field of medicine,

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now can receive

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for diseases that in the past WERE deemed uncurable.

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, with in-depth research in human physiology and psychology,

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dealing with life-threatening health complications are receiving mental support and more advanced palliative care which was not an option in the 20th century.

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, quality of living is more ensured.

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, with the rapid growth of technology, there are many

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that are more pronounced than in previous centuries including mental health

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. Growing in the conveniences of communication devices

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means

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are working more hours and are expected to do work quicker, which contributes to long-term anxiety and depression. Another problem that surfaces is human connections are decreasing because of the ease of using smartphones to contact someone. The human mind thrives on human connections which makes

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issue harmful to the brain and leads to disorders like depression more common than in the past. Despite having more mental

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still have the support of not only their friends and family but

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qualified professionals.

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with careful consideration from the public,

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situation can be curbed. In conclusion, compared to past centuries,

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have better

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health but are more prone to having mental

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so it is generally consent upon that

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's lives are better.

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