The graph gives information about the percentage of the population of four different Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with additional predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the percentage of the
population
of South East Asia
countries which was earned every year from 1970 until 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upward trends in the population
all
of the Nations in South East Change preposition
of all
Asia
, while
the residents of the Phillipines
witnessed a considerable fall from Correct your spelling
Philippines
the
1990 until 2010 but it increased again and Change the article
apply
join
Wrong verb form
joined
the others trend
. Another interesting point is, Change to a genitive case
the trend of the other
the trend of the others
Indonesia
holds Correct word choice
that Indonesia
the
second place Correct article usage
apply
in
the end of 2020 Change the preposition
at
whereas
previously in 1970 it held the last
rank with a small population
in the city.
In contrast
, the amount of population
that living in the cities in the South East Asia
went up by steady
percentage. The prediction on 2030 until 2040 all of the South East Add an article
a steady
Asia
countries will experience a steady rise, especially Thailand. Likewise
, the South East Asia
population
around their town ended in minimum accretion above six percent
in 2040.Change the spelling
per cent
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