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The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar graphs above illustrate the Australian kids' activities in their leisure time in
age
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the age
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 range
five
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of five
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 to fourteen years
olds
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old
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. It can be clearly seen, that watching TV is all time
children'
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children's
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 favourite, whilst
skate boarding
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skateboarding
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 is the least favourite
among
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of
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 all.
However
, the graphs
also
 show the
difference
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different
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trend
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trends
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 between the
boys
 and
girls
 in activities selection. Rollerblading is played the most by around 40% of
boys
, whilst only below 30% of
girls
playing
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 skate.
Moreover
, nearly 75%
boys
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of boys
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 are riding
the
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bikes and
girls
 just around 60% that seems like the activity.
Nevertheless
, for
tv
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the tv
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 program, the number
among
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of
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girls
 and
boys
are
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is
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 exactly the same,
reach
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reaching
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 100% which
the
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is the
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 highest percentage of all.
In addition
, the computer games have 80% of young
man
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men
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 play it,
in contrast
, young ladies are less likely to engage in electronic games which
only
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is only
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 60%.
The art
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Art
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 and craft
is
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are
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 the least
boys
' favourite activities
by
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at
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 30%,
on the contrary
, the majority of
girls
are
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apply
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choose craft
by
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apply
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almost 60%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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