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The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020.

The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020.
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The bar chart compares the number of global
students
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 from six different countries studying in Australia in two years 2019 and 2020.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in the number of Indian, Nepalese, and Vietnamese
students
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 enrolling in Australian schools,
whereas
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 that of the remaining nations experienced a slight decrease. It is noteworthy that China remained at the top throughout the period despite the biggest reduction. It can be seen that India, Nepal, and Vietnam sent more
students
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 to Australia in 2020 than at the start of the period. In detail, the total of Indian
students
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 (just over 92.000) was over double that of Nepalese
students
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, which stood at around 42.000 in 2019. In the next year, the figures for both countries grew significantly, with the former seeing four times more growth than the latter, at 16.000 and 4.000 respectively.
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, at the beginning of the period, Vietnamese
students
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 consisted of 22.000 which rose marginally to 23.000 a year later. With regards to the other three nations, there was an approximate 2.000 decline in the number of
students
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 from Brazil and Malaysia to 21.000 and 19.500 respectively.
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, it is important to note that
although
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 China saw a marked fall, none of the countries'
students
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 studied in Australia as much as China's which accounted for over
165.000
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165,000
 in both years.
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