These days some young people say that museums should have entertainment activities and others say that museums are not for entertainment it are only for Education. Discuss both and give your opinion.

It is thought by many that
museums
should introduce new activities like entertainment for the citizen
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so that
visitors
could have a joyful
experience
.
However
, Many argue that
museums
are built for educational
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only.
For
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visitors
may learn
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historical past ,
children
must
experience
cultural depth and many more. In my opinion,
museum
authorities must bring a balance between the
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two aspects,
therefore
,
visitors
could have a well-rounded educational
experience
associated with colourful memories. On the one hand, proponents advocate that
museums
must bring entertainment
activites
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activities
to provide
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memorable
experience
to
visitor
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visitors
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. They argue that entertainment activities
such
as dancing
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for
children
, various musical instruments for musically
talent
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adults or
children
,
sports
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and sports
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activities in which parents and their
children
could take part , will bring enjoyment and memorable
experience
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experiences
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to the family.
Hence
, the amount of
vistiors
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visitors
will gradually increase. They
also
present ideas,
for
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builiding
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building
an
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cafetria
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cafeteria
cafeterias
around corners all over the
museum
will help
children
focus on the essentials as nobody could focus on a hungry
stomac
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stomach
. Providing food is
also
another significant
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they should include to enhance the quality of
museum
tour
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.
On the other hand
, opponents advocate that the purpose of the
museum
is to provide
educational
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an educational
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experience
to the
children
as well as
citizens. All the historical background of the country should be shown in the
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museum
to provide
educational
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an educational
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experience
and foster a culturally enriched society.
Furthermore
,
Museums
should enhance their ways to provide knowledgeable
experience
.
For instance
, giving the
citizen
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citizens
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a viewpoint where they could feel the narrative on why their forefathers have
faught
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fought
so hard and the present moment of freedom they are experiencing is the result of their forefather's sacrifice.
As a consequence
, the
citizen
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citizens
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will be more culturally stronger, historically enriched and wiser individuals and
this
experience
must go on to foster a vibrant society. In conclusion, both sides present strong arguments.
However
, I opine that
museums
should strike a balance between these two aspects to provide a wholesome
experience
of enriched culture, stronger
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views and equally an enjoyable
experience
to the
visitors
. Education mixed with joyful
fun
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loving
experience
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experiences
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will bring more value and foster well-rounded, educated individuals.
Hence
, these mesmerising
experience
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experiences
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will help by bringing many
visitors
to the
musuems
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museums
museum
.
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