These days some young people say that museums should have entertainment activities and others say that museums are not for entertainment it are only for Education. Discuss both and give your opinion.

It is thought by many that

museums

should introduce new activities like entertainment for the citizen

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so that

visitors

could have a joyful

experience

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However

, Many argue that

museums

are built for educational

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only.

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visitors

may learn

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historical past ,

children

must

experience

cultural depth and many more. In my opinion,

museum

authorities must bring a balance between the

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two aspects,

therefore

,

visitors

could have a well-rounded educational

experience

associated with colourful memories. On the one hand, proponents advocate that

museums

must bring entertainment

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activities

to provide

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memorable

experience

to

visitor

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visitors

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. They argue that entertainment activities

such

as dancing

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for

children

, various musical instruments for musically

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adults or

children

,

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and sports

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activities in which parents and their

children

could take part , will bring enjoyment and memorable

experience

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experiences

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to the family.

Hence

, the amount of

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visitors

will gradually increase. They

also

present ideas,

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builiding

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building

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cafetria

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cafeteria

cafeterias

around corners all over the

museum

will help

children

focus on the essentials as nobody could focus on a hungry

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stomach

. Providing food is

also

another significant

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they should include to enhance the quality of

museum

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.

On the other hand

, opponents advocate that the purpose of the

museum

is to provide

educational

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an educational

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experience

to the

children

as well as

citizens. All the historical background of the country should be shown in the

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museum

to provide

educational

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experience

and foster a culturally enriched society.

Furthermore

,

Museums

should enhance their ways to provide knowledgeable

experience

.

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, giving the

citizen

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a viewpoint where they could feel the narrative on why their forefathers have

faught

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fought

so hard and the present moment of freedom they are experiencing is the result of their forefather's sacrifice.

As a consequence

, the

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citizens

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will be more culturally stronger, historically enriched and wiser individuals and

this

experience

must go on to foster a vibrant society. In conclusion, both sides present strong arguments.

However

, I opine that

museums

should strike a balance between these two aspects to provide a wholesome

experience

of enriched culture, stronger

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views and equally an enjoyable

experience

to the

visitors

. Education mixed with joyful

fun

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loving

experience

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experiences

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will bring more value and foster well-rounded, educated individuals.

Hence

, these mesmerising

experience

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experiences

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will help by bringing many

visitors

to the

musuems

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museums

museum

.