The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the amount of students attending four different types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009.

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, there have been a lot of structural changes over the period, most significantly being, voluntary-controlled

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’ place as the main educators was taken by community ones. At the beginning of the given period, voluntary-controlled

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educated over half of all the students, which is double the amount of grammar

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, which took

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second place out of all the school types.

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, through the

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the popularity shrank to 20% and their place was taken by community

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, which grew gradually through the

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reaching almost 58 per cent in 2009. In terms of specialist

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and grammar ones, their numbers experienced changes as well. When comes to grammar

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, over the

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their popularity decreased by half, starting from 24% in 2000 to 12% in 2009, respectively. To compare, specialist

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educated

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somewhat similar amount of students in all

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nine

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however

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decreasing every year by one per cent.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, years with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

171 words

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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Why? What are the effects on society?

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The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write, and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work,if Involves say why you think the job would be suitable for her/him explain how to apply for this job

Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems