The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and table given depict the
statistic
of travellers at a specific holiday destination in Australia.
From the Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
overall
point of view, it is obvious that the Europeans are dominating the total Linking Words
visitors
with the Use synonyms
lenghtiest
visit duration. Correct your spelling
length of
In addition
, Linking Words
the
Australia's beaches have Correct article usage
apply
gravitated
Verb problem
attracted
the
tourists to do some outdoor activities like swimming and surfing.
Focusing on the Correct article usage
apply
visitors
' origin, the European nationalities have been contributing the largest percentage of the tourists with 16 days average length of stay. Following that are the American and Asian travellers with 18% and 10% shares respectively. The former Use synonyms
visitors
usually stay for 14 days Use synonyms
whereas
the latter incomers rest for only the half length of the Linking Words
previous
mentioned. Change the word
previously
Moreover
, a plethora of other nationalities Linking Words
also
visit the resort, comprising 18% of the total Linking Words
visitors
.
Moving on to the most popular hotel and main leisures, both European and other regions' tourists are keen to live on camp or caravan. The reason for their preference is because they are gravitated to outdoor Use synonyms
leisures
by the beach Fix the agreement mistake
leisure
such
as swimming, sunbathing, and surfing. Linking Words
In contrast
, Asian and American Linking Words
visitors
prefer to rest in decent hotels Use synonyms
while
observing the cityscape and the surrounding area.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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