Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Kids learning is an important and thorny topic. Anyway, there are two isolated opinions about

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schools should give them

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homework or not ,

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suppose it

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their knowledge abilities, but it could impact

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them

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a negative way. Homework could influence

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lifestyle. It makes them busy most of the day,

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the morning they are being on school , at the rest of the day they

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end up the school chores. Resulting in a lot of pressure

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of leisure time to conduct

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activities

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playing, having

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with family or friends and hangouts.

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their mental health

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to heavy tasks ,

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and not having much time for connection.

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sometimes

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. Assigning some tasks for the children to do at home,

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the teachers to ensure that they

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what they

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learned,

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the information

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mind,

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new info about math, by applying it after school that will make them understand more and making it hard to forget it.

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them to be more responsible as they should finish it by themself. In conclusion,

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homework

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some features, it has some flaws as well, which lead to bad stability. in my opinion, it should be

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to achieve balance and

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it useful.