It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is crucial for individuals to go beyond their comfort zone and do risky things,

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in their jobs and their private lives.

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would have some benefits and drawbacks. I personally think that the pros outweigh the cons. Having

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to do something that might have a

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has some benefits. The most important one is,

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people want to develop their

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and build an outstanding future for themselves they have to do something beyond their routines.

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, the BBC interviewed

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a successful businessman

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year, he mentioned that he was a simple employee in a company for five years but after a

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while

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he

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that if he continued his job, he would not be able to run his business, and he resigned.

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, many people like his family and colleagues Criticised him for that decision

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and told him that he would not be successful and regret

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leaving his job.

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,he followed his dream and took the

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and now he is one of the top 10

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successful

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in the UK. Albeit, for running his business, he had sold all of the things that the whole family had.

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could

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his private life, but he took the

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and followed his desires.

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, taking

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risk

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in

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our

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and personal lives has some drawbacks.

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, doing something that, it is not usual

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of stress. Because, if the people

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taken the

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without any success, they would have faced a

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of pecuniary problems, and

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their partners would have left them.

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,

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fear puts a

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of burden on their shoulders.

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, having done things that

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not have a clear consequence could waste a

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of time and energy. Admitting, if

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not reach the results that acceptable, all of that time and effort

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gone.

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, having done risky work

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is vital for

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personal and professional lives .

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, there are some disadvantages like wasting time and energy and a

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of stress,but the advantages like

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brilliant success in

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of them outweigh the drawbacks in my opinion.