In some countries, celebrities complain about the way the media publicizes their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

It is inevitable for prominent

people

to have a lot of attention from the public.

Therefore

, some famous individuals make a complaint to the media in order to have their

boundary

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. Some

people

insist that they have to admit

this

phenomenon as part of their fame.

However

, I strongly

dissagree

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disagree

with

this

opinion.

This

is because famous

people

have a

right

to have private space in their

life

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and they might be

a

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victime

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victims

by

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criminals.

To begin

with,

emient

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eminent

people

have a

right

to have their own space in their daily

live

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. In fact, everyone needs

their

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private room where they can be protected

by

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externel

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external

factors including famous

people

. Having a boundary plays a pivotal role in

people

's

live

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. When

people

's

right

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are invaded by other elements, they might be able to have mental issues

such

as depression,

anxitey

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anxiety

and so on. To cite an example, some

celebrities

in South Korea struggle with

thier

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their

mental problems since they do not have enough space for their schedule. They protest to media companies to stop posting their

life

in order to tackle

this problems

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. Sometimes, they have medicines or conduct sessions to deal with their stress.

Moreover

,

This

situation might lead their fandoms to have a sense of

worries

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and a lot of entertainment companies to lose their

assests

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assets

as

a

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prominent

people

in our society.

In addition

,

celebrities

might be able to become victims

by

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awuful

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awful

people

. The number of criminals has been increasing nowadays, some

people

, called a stoker, cross the

celebrities'private

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private

room. They are more likely to invade eminent

people

's daily

live

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by following their schedules every single day and taking a majority of pictures. Sometimes, they even attack

celebrities

physically.

For example

, there was a serious crime in China. One

of

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prominent actress, named Wan Wei was captured by a stoker. The criminal said that he was able to check her

lives

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life

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by watching media news all the time.

This

means that too much information about

celebrities

'

life

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lives

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might cause

deterimental

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detrimental

situation

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for them

such

as stoking,

captures

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and so on.

To sum up

, it is evident that some

people

reckon that they deserve to monitor

celebrities

'

life

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because of their fame.

However

, I totally

dissagree

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disagree

with it, since famous

people

have a

right

to have their

boundary

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and might

be targets

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by criminals.