It is inevitable for prominent
people
to have a lot of attention from the public.
Therefore
, some famous individuals make a complaint to the media in order to have their
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. Some
people
insist that they have to admit
this
phenomenon as part of their fame.
However
, I strongly
with
this
opinion.
This
is because famous
people
have a
right
to have private space in their
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and they might be
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criminals.
To begin
with,
people
have a
right
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. In fact, everyone needs
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private room where they can be protected
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factors including famous
people
. Having a boundary plays a pivotal role in
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's
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. When
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are invaded by other elements, they might be able to have mental issues
such
as depression,
and so on. To cite an example, some
celebrities
in South Korea struggle with
mental problems since they do not have enough space for their schedule. They protest to media companies to stop posting their
life
in order to tackle
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. Sometimes, they have medicines or conduct sessions to deal with their stress.
Moreover
,
This
situation might lead their fandoms to have a sense of
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and a lot of entertainment companies to lose their
as
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prominent
people
in our society.
In addition
,
celebrities
might be able to become victims
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people
. The number of criminals has been increasing nowadays, some
people
, called a stoker, cross the
room. They are more likely to invade eminent
people
's daily
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by following their schedules every single day and taking a majority of pictures. Sometimes, they even attack
celebrities
physically.
For example
, there was a serious crime in China. One
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prominent actress, named Wan Wei was captured by a stoker. The criminal said that he was able to check her
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by watching media news all the time.
This
means that too much information about
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'
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might cause
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for them
such
as stoking,
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and so on.
To sum up
, it is evident that some
people
reckon that they deserve to monitor
celebrities
'
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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because of their fame.
However
, I totally
with it, since famous
people
have a
right
to have their
boundaryFix the agreement mistake
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and might
be targetsChange the verb form
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by criminals.