You should spend about 20 minutes on the task. The maps below show the layout of James Park in 2017 and the proposed changes to the park in 2027. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The maps illustrate the difference in the layout of James
Park
before and after the redevelopment program. Overall
, the park
has become bigger, and 15000 more users are estimated to visit the park
montly
in 2027 when compared to 2017.
On the one hand, the statue and the main playground, present in the middle and west Correct your spelling
monthly
side
of the map respectively, have not changed post-renovation. Fix the agreement mistake
sides
However
, on the other hand
,in few
areas, facilities have been either expanded, added, or replaced. Correct article usage
a few
Firstly
, the fountain is replaced by a small garden, and the toddler playground hs
been changed into a theater area. Correct your spelling
has
Secondly
, a gymnasium is added right below the playground, to the south-west
side of the map. Correct your spelling
southwest
Additionally
, the science center
has been expanded to the east side. Change the spelling
centre
Lastly
, many paths have been paved to connect facilities to each other.
In conclusion, the development program added more facilities to the park
such
as Gymnasium
and Correct article usage
a Gymnasium
theater
. Change the spelling
theatre
This
has attracted a larger audience.Submitted by vani13padmakumar on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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