In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

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Nowadays, people are more concerned about sustainability and their impact on it.

However

, adopting

this

lifestyle

is not easy, it can involve

challenges

and changes in their

actions

. In

this

essay, I will explain what these

challenges

could be and how individuals can adopt new

actions

to contribute to sustainability.

Firstly

, adopting a new

lifestyle

is never easy. Especially in reducing your environmental impact, some of these

challenges

could include stopping consuming certain things and opting for eco-friendly ones.

For example

, there are some products for personal care that are made out of sustainable resources so that their production doesn't contaminate a lot as the others.

However

, these types of products are more expensive than regular ones, one example is the brand The Body Shop whose prices are 3 times higher than the regular body lotions in the market. These alternatives can involve

investment

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an investment

the investment

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of money.

That is

why some people feel that adopting

this

type of

lifestyle

could be very hard. Even though

this

could be true in some way, every person can decide what

actions

they can

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take

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according to

their possibilities. Some of these

actions

are not linked directly to money.

For example

, walking or riding a bike to get to a place

instead

of using a car can be better for the environment and cheaper; collecting water in the shower can be useful to not wasting it,

such

as recycling things that can be considered as trash but they can be used in other ways. These

actions

can have the same impact and still contribute to the environment. People can keep an easy

lifestyle

while

taking care of the environment, though there are some

challenges

involved there are still solutions for it.

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Provide a clear thesis statement in the introduction to outline the main points you will be discussing.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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286 words

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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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