In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

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Nowadays, people are more concerned about sustainability and their impact on it.

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, adopting

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lifestyle

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is not easy, it can involve

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and changes in their

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. In

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essay, I will explain what these

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could be and how individuals can adopt new

actions

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to contribute to sustainability.

Firstly

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, adopting a new

lifestyle

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is never easy. Especially in reducing your environmental impact, some of these

challenges

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could include stopping consuming certain things and opting for eco-friendly ones.

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, there are some products for personal care that are made out of sustainable resources so that their production doesn't contaminate a lot as the others.

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, these types of products are more expensive than regular ones, one example is the brand The Body Shop whose prices are 3 times higher than the regular body lotions in the market. These alternatives can involve

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an investment

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of money.

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why some people feel that adopting

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type of

lifestyle

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could be very hard. Even though

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could be true in some way, every person can decide what

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they can

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according to

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their possibilities. Some of these

actions

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are not linked directly to money.

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, walking or riding a bike to get to a place

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of using a car can be better for the environment and cheaper; collecting water in the shower can be useful to not wasting it,

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as recycling things that can be considered as trash but they can be used in other ways. These

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can have the same impact and still contribute to the environment. People can keep an easy

lifestyle

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while

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taking care of the environment, though there are some

challenges

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involved there are still solutions for it.

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Provide a clear thesis statement in the introduction to outline the main points you will be discussing.

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Ensure that each paragraph focuses on one main idea and supports it with relevant examples or explanations.

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Consider adding more specific and detailed examples to support your points.

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Be mindful of your grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

286 words

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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Last week, you visited a local supermarket and you got satisfactory service. Write a letter to the supermarket manager to thank. In your letter: - introduce yourself; - say why you are satisfied; - say thank you and write about your future visits.

organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what are the possible problems and solutions?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. DO you agree or disagree?

Each country has its own charity organizations. Sometimes people think that those organizations should only offer help to their own country while others thinks they are supposed to give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook, Zalo,...) have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?