The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.
The pie charts illustrate predictions for international manufacturing by field between 2040 and 2060.
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the services and manufacturing are expected to be higher than
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. Obviously, it is predicted that the proportion of energy and agriculture will undergo a decline,
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the opposite trend will be true for the rest of the sectors. Regarding the percentage of services and manufacturing, there will be a significant rise from 31% and 40% to 33% and 41% respectively over 20 year
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period.
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slightly from 3% and 15% in 2040 to 4% and 16% in 2060 in turn. The period between 2040 and 2060 is estimated will undergo a trivial decline
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% and 7% to 5% and 1% correspondingly in the figures of energy and agriculture.
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