Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

The
prevalance
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prevalence
of consumer culture and the pursuit of material possessions have led to heightened
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of consumption,resulting in an increase in waste production.
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,the modern preference for convenience
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led to the widespread use of
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dispose
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products and packaging,
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significant
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contribution
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to the
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volume of
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waste
generated. Governments should invest in comprehensive
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education campaigns to raise awareness about the environmental impact of excessive waste generation.Promoting responsible awareness about the
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environmental
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impact of excessive waste
genernaiton
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generation
,Promoting responsible consumption habits and sustainable lifestyle choices can empower individuals to make informed decisions and reduce
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waste
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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