The diagram below show the results of a survey from Taiwan explaining how students wanting to study overseas, chose a university from 1998-2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the results survey percentages of choosing
university
of male and female students
in Taiwan who want
to study abroad Wrong verb form
wanted
since
1998 to 2008. Change preposition
from
Overall
, the average percentages of male and female standards in choosing university
were not immensely different. Correct article usage
a university
Moreover
, male students
considered increasing choosing their university
based on cost
of tuition and location, Add an article
the cost
while
the
Correct article usage
apply
female
had more typical Fix the agreement mistake
females
university
by Fix the agreement mistake
universities
years
. Correct article usage
the years
Also
, the female students
show
few Wrong verb form
showed
of
standards decrease in three aspects, Change preposition
apply
whereas
the male had six.
To begin
, the male students
who choose
a Wrong verb form
chose
university
based on it
Correct pronoun usage
its
cost
of tuition and location in
1998 to 2008 were highly increased from 88% to 97% and 18% to 32% respectively. Change preposition
from
On the contrary
, Female
had more Fix the agreement mistake
Females
slightly
rise in selecting a Change the word
slight
university
based on five aspects namely cost
of tuition (93% to 95%), location (11% to 25%), modern teaching facilities (72% to 76%), quality of teachers (5% to 7%), and cost
of accommodation (91% to 93%).
On the other hand
, in
1998 to 2008, both Change preposition
from
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
decreased in Fix the agreement mistake
females
few
aspects of choosing a Correct article usage
a few
university
. Male
had lessened percentages in Fix the agreement mistake
Males
university
ranking (97% to 95%), modern teaching facilities (66% to 42%), good language support (73% to 61%), quality of teachers (13% to 6%), cost
of accommodation (92% to 86%), modern teaching methods (8% to 7%). While
, female students
were less consider
to choose a Wrong verb form
considered
university
abroad in ranking (100% to 90%), good language support (39% to 21%), and modern teaching methods (5% to 2%).Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words university, students, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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