Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

The high

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of some sophisticated medicines is often attributed as the root cause of some patients' deaths in third-world nations. Pharmaceutical companies are

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requested to sell their products at a discounted

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in those parts of the world. I am convinced that only a reduction in prices from manufacturers is not going to solve the problem and in the

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I will postulate my reasons. Disease-induced mortality rates have seen a significant downtrend over the

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centuries in the developed countries

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in the low per capita income regions

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reduction is still staggering.

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inspires the idea that treatment cost optimization can help the scenario and medicine is one of the top components in that budget. First of all, decreasing the selling

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only from the company side will not stimulate the local governments to have a concrete sustainable healthcare plan for the long term.

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will be just a temporary patch to deal with the scenario.

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action does not guarantee that the end sufferers will get proper

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as from experience we know that in poor countries there are a lot of middle-men and syndicates who control the market. To worsen

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, giving off in major products can lead to financial loss for the producers which in turn can pose a threat to their existence.

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but not least, there are affluent

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in those countries who will benefit from low costs without adding any value to the primary proposition.

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, we can not let poverty become the reason for demise where

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do not have enough purchasing power. So some multi-dimensional endeavours are needed here concerting the efforts from government, non-government organizations and drug producers. Here manufacturers can absorb some hit in their profit margin, the government should

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add some subsidies and ensure legislation to ensure correct

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are getting benefits.

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, they can fix the maximum retail

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and give those for free to poor

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through NGOs. In a nutshell,

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a global problem is never sustainable.

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global pharmaceutical giants need to come forward to sacrifice their gain in an affordable way, national bodies should

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put their effort at the table so that the right

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get the benefit properly.