Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

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are kept for a variety of reasons. Keeping

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is a global act. There is

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, a bone of contention as a group believes raising

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can be helpful for

children

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whilst another

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these

animals

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can harm and be sources of infection to

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.

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essay seeks to look at both views. My opinion is that

children

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learn some essential skills from keeping

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.

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with, keeping tamed

animals

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gives

people

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companionship.

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, my parents had busy lifestyles when I was growing up but because of my pet Kiki, I never felt lonely in their absence.

Pets

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are able to provide some comfort and company to their

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.

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find themselves sharing their happy and sad

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with their tamed

animals

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who in turn, respond by wiggling their tails or making some gestures. It is clear

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that, some

animals

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can occupy the vacuum

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created in the absence of other human beings. In my opinion,

children

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who keep

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are never left lonely.

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, taming

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heightens one's ability to

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for others. To illustrate

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, it is evident that domestic

animals

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that are kept as

pets

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cannot help themselves when it comes to feeding and keeping themselves clean. The responsibility lies with their

owners

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to provide these

pets

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with food and bathe them. Providing these for the

animals

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teaches their

owners

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to

care

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for another hand. Meanwhile, our society revolves around caring for one another. In my opinion,

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nurturing skills

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an important human attribute that

children

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learn from raising

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.

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, some

people

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opine

pets

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can hurt

children

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and be sources of diseases to

children

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. Undoubtedly, there have been

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reports of kids picking up germs from their

pets

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.

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, ticks on dogs commonly

attaches

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to the skin of

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.

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, a few

children

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have been scratched by cats or bitten by their dogs. Actually,

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acts come about from unclean and unhealthy

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.

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can be achieved when the carers bathe them regularly and seek verteniaru services for them.

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in a household should be taught provocative ways of handling various home

animals

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so the

owners

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completely avoid them to not get hurt. From the aforementioned reasons, disease transmission and

animals

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hurting their

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are negative effects that can clearly be eliminated

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the

owners

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handle their

pets

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with

care

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. In conclusion,

pets

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play a significant role in the lives of the members of a household. I believe

children

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get their positive share in raising

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through having

friendship

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and learning to

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for helpless creatures.