It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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nowadays who opt to take a riskier path in their professional careers and their personal living

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phenomenon is happening because of the preference of the younger generation who are seeking a more challenging and competitive environment than their older compatriot. In my opinion, there are some positive highlights to be considered, but there are

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negative ones that cannot be taken lightly. The increasing number of

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are choosing a riskier chance is related to the junior workforce. They believe that they would gain a higher possibility of improving their career path,

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earning more income, and having a better standard of living than ones who rather stay in the ‘comfort zone’. From a comparative study perspective, receiving other duties that are not related to their job description and overtime workers are rewarded higher times than persons who are not. One example of

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is taking a train to meet his family in the city suburbs. On his journey, he encounters a suspected terrorist act from the other side of his train carriage. Regardless of his lack of authority and safety equipment at that time, he stands up to secure passengers, contacts the nearest security guard, and decreases surrounding tension. From

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act, his superior officer rewards him with more ranks, pay grades, and benefits for his family. Even though there are advantages outtakes in regard to staying out of the safe zone, I think that the disadvantages of

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lifestyle are heavier than

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may seem to think. For individuals who

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spontaneous and emotional characteristics, taking a risk would end up losing everything if the situation were not calculated properly. The chance any opportunity would become a positive gain is like a two-sided coin situation. An example would be a businessman who tried to expand his distribution in an unrecognized, unknowledgeable territory because he believed more in his intuition and not his logical reason. If he had spent his

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exploring and conducting proper research, he would have not lost his income and

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. From what I have seen before, choosing any riskier opportunity without any consideration and logical thinking process would lead to damage and a higher burden. If

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increase their time to analyze options available to them, they will receive benefits and

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have an opportunity to explore more situations.