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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Why? What will be effects on society?​

#students #science #subjects #university #countries #effects #society
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It is true that these days, many countries just have a few
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 who want to study
science
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 when they are college
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.
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 can be attributed to several factors, which can lead to some negative consequences. There are various reasons why many
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 choose to study social
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 at university. One possible explanation is that
science
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 often require much independent study which
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 for
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 who prefer a structured learning environment.
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, these
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 spend a lot of time studying
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subjects
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 for which they have no passion and
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 they fall behind in their studies. These requirements of
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subjects
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 deterred
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 from choosing these
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. Another reason worth mentioning is the lack of modern laboratory equipment to do research in their
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 fields. Many
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 do not have many opportunities to put theory into practice, so it is difficult to develop their careers.
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, the lack of modern laboratory equipment deters
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 from choosing
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. There are many problems resulting from the shortage of the number of
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 who choose
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.The first issue is a need for more skilled professionals in technique and technology which hinder innovation and progress. Example for, healthcare in which technological advances are critical to providing better treatments stands in need of healthcare professionals but the number of doctors in the country is not enough. they recruit foreign doctors who communicate in foreign languages to meet patient needs so language barriers lead to misunderstanding each other.
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, that affects poorer quality healthcare services and negatively affects
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well-being. In conclusion, many reasons can be given to explain the decline in
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, and
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 can give rise to many issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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