Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided on when

children

should start their

school

years.

Although

beginning

studying

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academically at an early

age

can foster improved

behaviors

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, I believe that it would be too stressful for the

children

so they can not gain

the

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knowledge

effectively and

starting

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at the

age

of 7 is a more plausible alternative. On the one hand, one might argue that giving

children

early education can force them to be well-behaved family members as soon as they begin to perceive.

This

is predicated on the assumption that those

children

will have a chance to familiarize themselves with the

school

regulations and be taught common morals.

This

may help them to be less stubborn and more obedient, which obviously benefits themselves and their parents as a whole.

However

,

this

line of reasoning is not sound since if

children

were exposed to academic

knowledge

at

such

an early

age

, they would be overwhelmed and stressed, making them unable to absorb the

knowledge

efficiently.

This

would negate any benefits of the aforementioned proposal.

On the other hand

, requiring

children

to attend schools at the

age

of at least 7 would be a more reasonable choice.

This

is because

children

at

this

age

are more mature, enabling them to deal with the potential stress from

school

lessons, and

consequently

gain

knowledge

more effortlessly.

In addition

, delaying

school

also

spares time for

children

to play.

This

would benefit

children

mentally as through playing,

children

have to imagine and think more, which develops their problem-solving and learning skills. Undoubtedly, these vital skills will facilitate

children

’s learning in schools, allowing them to succeed academically. In conclusion, I believe that giving

children

early access to education may deteriorate the efficiency of

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process as

children

may suffer from pressure, and only when

children

turn 7 should they be given education as the time in early years is crucially important for them to develop both their ability to cope with stress and skills for successful learning.