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The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and present.
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The maps illustrate how the village of Reymouth has developed since 1995 . There have been significant changes in
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 period.
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, there were changes in sports facilities and housing over the given period.
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,some facilities have disappeared. In 1995, in the east of the main highway there was farmland, and ,under it. there was a forest park .In the south of the forest part, there was a small hotel. On both sides of the principal road, there were houses. Above the transversal road, there were five shops. In the sea, there was a fishing port, and above it, there were fish markets. Nowadays, the place is different9.The farmland and the forest park were united and transformed into a sports place for golf and tennis. Near the hotel , a car park was constructed.More houses have been constructed on the east and west sides of the main avenue.
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,the fishing port has been extinct, and the fish markets near the port were transformed into apartments.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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