The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and present.

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The maps illustrate how the village of Reymouth has developed since 1995 . There have been significant changes in

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, there were changes in sports facilities and housing over the given period.

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,some facilities have disappeared. In 1995, in the east of the main highway there was farmland, and ,under it. there was a forest park .In the south of the forest part, there was a small hotel. On both sides of the principal road, there were houses. Above the transversal road, there were five shops. In the sea, there was a fishing port, and above it, there were fish markets. Nowadays, the place is different9.The farmland and the forest park were united and transformed into a sports place for golf and tennis. Near the hotel , a car park was constructed.More houses have been constructed on the east and west sides of the main avenue.

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,the fishing port has been extinct, and the fish markets near the port were transformed into apartments.

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The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and present.

Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity is a major health problem. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?

With ease of e books comes the decline in paper books. some people see this as a good forward while others do not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

Foreign language should be part of curriculum of the school. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, men and women are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?