Some people say that all popular TV programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some

people

believed

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that famous

TV

programmes are much more important

to educate

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in educating

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youngsters about today's

problems

of

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the

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society

. I completely agree with

this

view, because in

this

developing

world

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world,

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young

people

should be aware of the

last

issues

of the public and even though they ought to try to find solutions

with

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the

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positive way. On the one hand, there are two reasons why

TV

programmes should avoid

to show

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the

country

's inner conflicts. First of all,

younger

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the younger

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generation

are

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not ready yet to understand that kind of significant

problems

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. Because their mind is not developed enough to realize what is expressing the main problem when they are still exploring the environment for themselves.

TV

shows should display plenty of entertainment programmes that

devoted

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expand

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the horizon of the younger generation rather than

society

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issues

.

Moreover

, the patriots who are dedicated their life

for

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working want to relax from exciting shows. The programs that

conveys

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social

problems

lead to not only

a

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questions which have no

any

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precise answers

,

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but

also

might lead to overthinking and

high

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level of stress among the citizens who are public servants.

On the other hand

, there are two main aspects as to why a

country

should illustrate

TV

shows addressing the key societal

issues

. Admittedly, the younger generation in

society

can gain competence through watching

TV

programs that address societal

issues

in their daily lives. It is

the

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good way to attract young

people

to orientate to find ideas that acquire

solution

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solutions

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of

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the

problems

.

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can achieve their aims with

this

approach and

also

that

country

may

to

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flavourish

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flourish

flavours

society

.

Besides

that,

people

can contribute to

find

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finding

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or

think

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thinking

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about significant

problems

which hold the

country

back from development with the aid of

TV

programs. Because it is

easier

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an easier

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way to teach

people

such

kind of

that major

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that major problem

those major problems

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problems

which is related to

society

with media

contents

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content

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and online news.

As a result

of

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apply

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that

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some

people

starts

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to understand the main root of the

problems

and can try to give their own ideas to solve the

issues

.