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You saw a column in the newspaper about you childhood friend. You would like to contact him or her. Write a letter to the editor of this newspaper asking for details about your friend. Inculde, Why do you want to contact him or her How the editor can contact you

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Dear Sir, I am writing a request letter regarding the
newspaper
 that
i
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 read
last
 week. I saw my
friend
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friend's
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 photo when
i
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 was a kid
on
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 your
newspaper
. I have been looking for
this
 guy
in
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for
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 many years.
It
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 very important to me to see
this
 guy
on
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 your
newspaper
. In
addtion
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addition
 to that,
i
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 really want him to contact
and
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me and
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 talk to him as soon as possible, but
i
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 do not have his phone number. For your information,
this
guy
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 name is Michael Bryon and he has
been
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spend
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 years overseas
studied
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studying
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 in chemistry at United
state
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 of America. Now he is a professor in weapons
in
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 the military base
at
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USA
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. The reason why
i
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deseperate
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desperate
 to talk to him. His
mother
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mother is
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 still alive and she
want
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wants
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 to meet him and she always
asked
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 me if
i
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could
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 help her
finding
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 her son.
Fourtunately
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Fortunately
,
i
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am
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please
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that
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when
i
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 accidentally read your
newspaper
 and
i
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finally
 saw his photo. I appreciate
for
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your time and please do not hesitate
me
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to contact me
on
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this
 email address [email protected].
Yours'
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 sincerely, Tokateti Totoki
Submitted by riemwatokateti on

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format
Make sure to follow the proper letter format and use appropriate salutations and closings.
content
Focus on providing more specific information about your childhood friend and why you want to contact them.
structure
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, with each paragraph discussing a single idea.
tone
Use a more formal and professional tone throughout the letter.
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