The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts below display the income and waste of a charity for children in a year in the United States
Overall
, there are more earnings than spending. Food had the biggest profit, followed by community contributions, while
program services had the highest expenditures.
About the income, donated food had 86.6% of the overall
share, the next biggest earnings comes from the community contribution with a little more than one-tenth of the portion, specifically, 10.4%. Program revenue only contributed to a small part, with 2.2%, while
investment income and government occupied only 0.2% each, and the rest 0,4% comes from other profits.
There are three main spendings, where the program services occupied almost all the expenditures, with 95.8%. Fundraising had a proportion of only 2.6% of the overall
paying out, while
management and general wastes were 1% less than fundraising. Finally
, the total earning was $53,561,580 while
the waste was 53,224,896, so there is around 300,000 more revenue than expenditures.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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