The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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chart shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. China

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110 Billion in 2014

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to other developed European

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European countries United

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spent similar amounts in 2014.

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Singapore, Korea & Malaysia have

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less on travelling as their economy still developing and they

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rather than luxury travelling.

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