The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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chart shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. China

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less spending pattern

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in 2014. China

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highest travel expenditure

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110 Billion in 2014

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to other developed European

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is the largest populated country in the world. When

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spent similar amounts in 2014.

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Singapore, Korea & Malaysia have

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less on travelling as their economy still developing and they

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rather than luxury travelling.

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on budget travelling

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Asia.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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