The pie chart below shows a frequance of US adult's online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferances.

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The two charts (pie and bar) present information measured in proportion about the habits of American adults who frequently bought online in 2015 and a

further

grouping and denoting online shopping favourites.

Overall

, in the pie chart, Adults were dominant in less often spending money on online shops and the

last

one was weekly.

Additionally

, in the column chart, the physical store is almost dominant in 4 categories of

shoppers

To begin

with, in 2015, Adults from the U.S. less often spent money on online shops with a percentage of 37%, and people who a few times per month shopped on online shops with 28%. 20% of them never purchased online,

while

15% grown people bought online shop.

In addition

, regarding preferences, the physical store is supreme with approximately 80% of less frequent online buyers, above 60% of all online

shoppers

, and below 60% of monthly

shoppers

preferring to buy from it. Meanwhile, about 60% of weekly online

shoppers

choose to buy online.

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