The pie chart below shows a frequance of US adult's online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferances.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows a frequance of US adult's online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preferances.

The two charts (pie and bar) present information measured in proportion about the habits of American adults who frequently bought online in 2015 and a

further

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grouping and denoting online shopping favourites.

Overall

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, in the pie chart, Adults were dominant in less often spending money on online shops and the

last

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one was weekly.

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, in the column chart, the physical store is almost dominant in 4 categories of

shoppers

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with, in 2015, Adults from the U.S. less often spent money on online shops with a percentage of 37%, and people who a few times per month shopped on online shops with 28%. 20% of them never purchased online,

while

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15% grown people bought online shop.

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, regarding preferences, the physical store is supreme with approximately 80% of less frequent online buyers, above 60% of all online

shoppers

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, and below 60% of monthly

shoppers

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preferring to buy from it. Meanwhile, about 60% of weekly online

shoppers

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choose to buy online.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words shoppers with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pie chart
bar chart
percentage
illustrate
engaged
preferences
category
products
popular
demographics
convenience
variety
shopping behavior
technological advancements

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