Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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other methods of medications and treatments

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of going to their general practitioners have been increasing recently. In my opinion,

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and causes

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enormous problems, which I will explain in

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essay. The most important side-effect of

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is the irreversible consequences.

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, the patients who have serious diseases, like cancer or mental issues, need

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specific medication, which must be prescribed by their specialists.

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, some of these groups decide not to continue their

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and use other methods.

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of their diseases and even death, which there are no solutions for them.

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cancer in 2019.

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in the groups of the folk, who chose other ways of treating

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of consultation with their doctors. Despite

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that,

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number was around 15

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for patients with the right

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patients is a negative development for every country.

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, I do

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understand

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, choosing the different methods for their

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. Because, in many situations, if

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sick

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want to book an appointment with their doctors, it might take months. Undoubtedly, everyone looks for quicker solutions to solve the problems.

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way may lead an enormous pecuniary problems. Because

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way always is very expensive and

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choosing

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treatment

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may cause ominous results.

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, recently, the number of

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with health issues, using other ways of medications and treatments

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of going to their doctors is rising.

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, some elements, like having faster

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may motivate

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to do that, notwithstanding, the negative effects, like death,

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of the wrong

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, have a huge effect on the development of the nations in my opinion.