in some countries , owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

In today’s society, owning a

home

is

one

of

ultimate

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goals for

people

, so its importance is increasing than renting a

home

. Some

people

think it has more

benefit

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and I agree with

this

point of view based

what

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I will explain about its positive situation in

this

essay.

Firstly

, building a family is something really important to some

people

in their

20’s

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or

30’s

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especially in developing countries. In order to

that

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, a family need their own

home

to make it more comfortable and

also

for their identity in society.

Moreover

, owning a

home

is a form of investment and some

people

think it will be profitable in the future. They

also

do not need to pay the bill monthly or yearly

that

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does not make them

owning

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the asset.

For instance

,

a

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apply

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research by an economic organization in Southeast Asia shows that property is

one

of the most profitable

investment

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in the

last

5 years.

On the other hand

, renting a

home

is the fastest way for a new family to live in a house. They can choose the best location and other

specification

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based on their needs. They do not have to think a lot because it

just

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temporary

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a temporary

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place to live, but they can choose the best

one

without

pay more

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paying as much

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as if they

buy

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it.

This

situation usually

apply

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to

people

who have an occupation that

require

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them to move in a period of time. In conclusion, the decision about owning a

home

or renting

is depend

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on

people

’s

need

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and situation but if they have more budget, owning a

home

is better than renting

one

.