people think that marriage should happen only when couples are financially secure. Do you agree or disagree?

I strongly believe that
this
academy is best suited for me because
this
educational
institution
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vision is Education and enterprise, Research and innovation, People and culture and Partnerships and place.
This
university
is high-quality and
heart
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of the Oxford Brookes and achieve 11 National teaching
fellow ships
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. Even though
,
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all the information provided on the
university
website is very clear
therefore
everyone can understand it very easily.
Additionally
,
this
university
offers a range of opportunities beyond our studies to gain experience and develop new skills.
Moreover
, teachers provide proper guidance and knowledge, advice to help
to
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student
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work towards resolving
own
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issues.
University
also
provides not only degree but
they
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also
give
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work placement, professional knowledge, links to study, integrated
careers
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guidance and so much more to build employment career. The accommodation
provide
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with
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4,000 self-catered, single
study-bedrooms
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and 130 studio apartments.
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