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people think that marriage should happen only when couples are financially secure. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #marriage #couples
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I strongly believe that
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 academy is best suited for me because
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 educational
institution
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 vision is Education and enterprise, Research and innovation, People and culture and Partnerships and place.
This
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university
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 is high-quality and
heart
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 of the Oxford Brookes and achieve 11 National teaching
fellow ships
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fellowships
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. Even though
,
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apply
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 all the information provided on the
university
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 website is very clear
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 everyone can understand it very easily.
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,
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university
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 offers a range of opportunities beyond our studies to gain experience and develop new skills.
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, teachers provide proper guidance and knowledge, advice to help
to
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student
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students
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 work towards resolving
own
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their own
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 issues.
University
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 provides not only degree but
they
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apply
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also
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give
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work placement, professional knowledge, links to study, integrated
careers
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career
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 guidance and so much more to build employment career. The accommodation
provide
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with
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4,000 self-catered, single
study-bedrooms
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study bedrooms
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 and 130 studio apartments.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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