The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below depicts the
process
of making precooked
noodles
.
Overall
, the
process
of manufacturing precooked
noodles
is consist
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of three main stages: 1- gathering main ingredients 2- preparing and cooking 3-
labeling
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labelling
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and selling
Firstly
, stored flour in silos is transferred to
factory
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by trucks.
Secondly
, the
process
of producing precooked
noodles
begin
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by adding water and oil to the flour.
Then
, these materials are mixed in the mixer machine.
Consequently
, the prepared dough is sent into the roller machine in order to flatten it
to
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tiny sheets. After that, the sheets are cut into the same size
of
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strips. In
this
stage, a specific amount of the strips are twisted and placed on
noodles
discs to be cooked by adding some oil.
Next,
they enter
in
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the
process
of steaming the remained water
in
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.
Then
, the dried
noodles
are put in the cups to be packed. but before that, some
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and spices are added as flavor.
Finally
, the labels are stuck on the cups to be eligible to sell.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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