The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below depicts the
process
of making precooked noodles
.
Overall
, the process
of manufacturing precooked noodles
is consist
of three main stages: 1- gathering main ingredients 2- preparing and cooking 3- Change the verb form
consists
labeling
and selling
Change the spelling
labelling
Firstly
, stored flour in silos is transferred to factory
by trucks. Add an article
the factory
Secondly
, the process
of producing precooked noodles
begin
by adding water and oil to the flour. Correct subject-verb agreement
begins
Then
, these materials are mixed in the mixer machine. Consequently
, the prepared dough is sent into the roller machine in order to flatten it to
tiny sheets. After that, the sheets are cut into the same size Change preposition
into
of
strips. In Change preposition
as
this
stage, a specific amount of the strips are twisted and placed on noodles
discs to be cooked by adding some oil. Next,
they enter in
the Change preposition
apply
process
of steaming the remained water in
. Change preposition
apply
Then
, the dried noodles
are put in the cups to be packed. but before that, some herd
and spices are added as flavor. Correct your spelling
herbs
Finally
, the labels are stuck on the cups to be eligible to sell.Submitted by golriiz23 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, noodles with synonyms.
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