The diagram shows the process for labeling shellfish for the international market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram demonstrates the procedure
of
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for
labeling
shellfish for the worldwide market. Change the spelling
labelling
This
process requires five steps to finally
send the shellfish to the consumers. Those steps are fishing, monitoring, labeling
, processing and shipping.
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labelling
Initially
, every boat is installed with the GPS, therefore
the satellite can capture the location data. This
satellite is very essential for the monitoring process. After that, the fisherman do
the fishing normally and they are automatically monitored Change the verb form
does
from
the data which is sent through the satellite. Monitoring activity happens in Santiago. Change preposition
by
Next,
after the catch, each is labeled
by a generated barcode. Change the spelling
labelled
This
barcode is very important to certify the shellfish. After that, all the catches go to the processing plant. The processing activity starts from cleaning and preparing the goods to be ready . Finally
, the packages are shipped to all locals with
land transportation and international consumers Change preposition
by
with
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by
a
plane. The international market includes Asia, Africa, and South America.Correct article usage
apply
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