Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Some proponents argue that young people should be given the chance to perform unpaid employment during their free

time

in today’s era of modernization for the benefit of the

neighborhood

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and society.

While

I disagree that

this

should be

compulsory

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job, I agree that working for charity would encourage the development of society and its members. On the one hand, in my opinion, it would be wrong

to

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teenagers

for obliging

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to volunteer.

Firstly

, most

of

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young people are under the pressure of studying as they are fully occupied

of

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with

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schedule

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in school and do not have enough

time

for relaxation.

For instance

, in Vietnam, In spite of learning at school, students still need to do abundant homework which

allow

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them to have only thirty minutes per day to blow off their steam.

This

leads to

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overload and even

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not only their physical but

also

their mental illness.

In addition

, it turns

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be worse if they obtain inadequate social work. Without payment, teenagers often lack

of

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motivation which

cause

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to

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bad results.

As a consequence

, some people could contest the

overall

efficacy of the required unpaid

labor

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, claiming that it would not always produce the expected outcomes in terms of character development and

community

improvement.

On the other hand

, I would argue that young adults should contribute to their

community

. First and foremost,

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taking

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part in social work can teach them multiple life skills.

For example

, they learn to be punctual to cooperate with other team members, If they encounter a problem, they have to come up with a certain solution.

Such

soft skills can help them to be more mature in

their

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future.

In addition

, juveniles can develop a sense of responsibility.

For example

, they can recognize the necessity of not littering or destroying public

properties

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.

As a result

, their

community

can stand a better chance of

safer

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and cleaner environment. In conclusion,

although

doing the job in the spare

time

brings some disadvantages for adolescents. I still believe that taking on volunteer activities in

the

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spare

time

can be a good way to raise awareness for not only young individuals but

also

whole

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community

.