The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of absenteeism for five reasons
such
as illness, stress
, person
needs, family responsibilities, and unexpected Replace the word
personal
problems
in a country in Europe during a ten-year period from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, there were many significant changes during the period. While
the percentages of stress
, personal needs, and unexpected problems
increased over time, the figures for other types decreased.
It can be clearly observed from the chart that the highest percentage of three
surveys was allocated for illness at nearly 45% in comparison with around 27% for family responsibilities, 14% for Correct article usage
the three
person
needs, and under 8% for unexpected Replace the word
personal
problems
and stress
in 2000. After five years, while
the proportion of Replace the word
personal
person
needs and unexpected Replace the word
personal
problems
experienced a slight increase of over 5%, there was a moderate decrease of under 5% Change preposition
for
in
other types of reasons.
In the following five years, the proportion of Change preposition
for
person
needs was roughly 23%, which was double that of Replace the word
personal
stress
. By contrast
, the figures for illness and unexpected problems
saw a gradual decline to 35% and nearly 15% respectively. Besides
, the percentage of family responsibilities in 2010 was the same as in 2005 (at 25%).Submitted by luongduy30411996 on
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