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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, we are living in a world
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lot of technology and
this
 is causing changes. Some
people
 are moving to cities because for them is more comfortable and useful, there are more things
such
 as monuments and shops. Unfortunately, the population in the countryside is decreasing and
this
 could create both positive and negative developments
such
 as the creation of new places of work and so on. In
this
 essay, I will explain why in the future there will be some advantages and I will explain my points of view.
On the other hand
, for many
people
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 to the cities can be spectacular because there are more opportunities at work.
For instance
, in the big centre like New York, Milano or Roma there
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is
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 more possibilities
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to
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 having a good career rather than
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to live
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 in the countryside.
However
, there are some negative aspects, in, fact in the cities there is a lot of pollution and problems traffic-related. In my opinion, the best solution Is to live in a small town, near the big city because
this
 permits us to avoid some problems.
First,
people
 do not need to leave their parents to go
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 the big centres and we can avoid some diseases
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 cancer and throat ache caused by the smoke of engine cars.
Furthermore
, to live in a big metropolitan area you need a lot of money and not all
people
 have the possibility of having them-
To sum up
, living in a big town can have more advantages, they permit them to improve their
life-style
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 but sometimes
this
 can lead
some
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 problems
such
 as
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disease.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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