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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

#people #idea #schools #person #parent #skills
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 system which somebodies
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 that
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parenting
 should be a part of that. Many parents these days are young and do not have useful information about children and their needs so I agree with teaching parenting in platform tutorial. In the past, most of
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 and skills were
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parent
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 during their daily
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younger
 generation,
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, in our modern world
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 have
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 lifestyle and do not
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 enough time with their
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therefore
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 responsibility to tutorial young people to prepare for parental stage.
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 environment is the first
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 with some other pupils
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 students can improve their
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knowledge
 with their classmates.
Parent
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 should
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consider both sides of their children,
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 mental and physical needs.
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, it is a vital problem that
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 of children
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 with the world around them, so
although
 every
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child
children
 know that their
parent
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 them
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it is essential to say them a lot and
also
 hug them until they
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 that they are in a safe
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place
 even when they are under 7 years. And
also
 mothers and fathers have to inspire them to achieve their aims and protect and grow their
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 with have a perfect connection
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 them. In sum, In my
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opinion
, it is
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 essential course that the educational system ought to cover in our schools in
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worlds
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,
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because
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 tutorial was removed and
also
 the ways of
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childrens
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 mental is really vital.
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