Many students take part-time jobs while studying in universities. Is this a bad or good idea?

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days, it is very common for

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a student

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to perform a

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time

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along with

their studies. There are

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several reasons for which people thought that doing a

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is

appropiate

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appropriate

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but some people thought that it's not. On one hand, doing a

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allows a student to become financially independent.

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are performing a

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can earn money from it.They can use

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not only for education fees but

also

can use it for their regular expenses.

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they can develop their money management skill.

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, these particular

students

can develop their corporate personality

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this

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. It

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their communication skill.

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sector which

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them a lot in their future professional life.

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, some people believe that

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can hamper their studies. Those

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who

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perform a

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get less

time

for their studies.

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alongside

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their study leaven. a student more stressed and

anxiety

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insufficient

time

for their family and friends.

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part

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studying is a wise decision. It's a good thought to do both together.

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use their

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both can be noticed and aid in their bright future.