The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph depicts the Tourism Information Office receiving a number of questions in one city over a six-
month
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period in 2011.
Overall
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, There are three ways of sending the enquiries.
First,
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in person and by telephone, which
it
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shows upward trends.
conversely
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, the use of the latter and email experienced downward. Regarding the two arcane trends, in person, which stood just above 400 questions in the first
month
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and
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apply
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continuously rose up and reached the peak at 1800 questions in the final
month
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.
then
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, by phone, it illustrated a slight decrease from about 9000 to 8000 enquiries in January and February. it
then
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hit the highest point at 1600 in the final
month
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.
On the other hand
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, the enquiries that were sent by letter/email indicated a gradual decline.In January, it started at just under 800 and gradually decreased to hit the lowest point at approximately 350 in the
last
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month
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words month with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • number of inquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • six-month period
  • increased steadily
  • reached a peak
  • decreased slightly
  • increased dramatically
  • experienced a gradual decline
  • general trend
  • highest number
  • lowest number
  • significant increase
  • tourism interest
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