The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.
The given layout delineates the information related to
assembly
and working of simple Correct article usage
the assembly
water
filter
and how Fix the agreement mistake
filters
it
help to produce clean Correct pronoun usage
they
water
which is suitable for drinking. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that water
Correct article usage
the water
filter
machine conatin
different layers of distinct material and Correct your spelling
contain
contains
connected
to Add a missing verb
is connected
storage
drum.
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the storage
Water
Correct article usage
The water
filter
appliance contain a plastic lid to cover the filter
tank
. Water
is filled in a filter
tank
, surrounded by a platic
Correct your spelling
plastic
barrrel
. Correct your spelling
barrel
This
tank
have
three discrete layers. Change the verb form
has
Intital
layer is made of sand which is Correct word choice
The initial
thickest
among Correct article usage
the thickest
other
two, followed by Correct article usage
the other
charoal
sheet. Correct your spelling
charcoal
This
film is thinnest
and is between sand and gravel covering. Gravel covering is Correct article usage
the thinnest
last
layer and Correct article usage
the last
thickness
is more than charcoal but less than Correct article usage
the thickness
sand
layer. The lank which Correct article usage
the sand
contain
all these layers is known as Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
above
Correct article usage
the above
storage
drum.
This
tank
is connected to an
another Remove the article
apply
storage
drum by a pipe. This
help
in Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
flow
of clean Add an article
the flow
water
to storage
Correct article usage
the storage
tank
. Storage
tank
contain an outlet which is at the bottom of the Fix the agreement mistake
tanks
tank
, in this
case
a tap. Add the comma(s)
case,
This
help
in utilizing the purified Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
water
for drinking.Submitted by khushiaggarwal255 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, filter, storage, tank with synonyms.
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