Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Sciences and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is argued that

history

is the most essential course at

school

,

while

others think that in our modern world

subjects

like

Science

and Technology are the most significant. In

this

essay, I will take the position of STEM

subjects

' importance.

Firstly

,

History

is essential in a

school

program because

students

should be varied in their knowledge. Without knowing the past, we can not analyze the present;

history

helps us to understand each other.

Furthermore

,

history

classes are developing our critical thinking skills and memory.

For instance

, if

students

do not learn about the cruel

time

of World War 2, they will not know the importance of peace that we have and will underestimate the political influence on the Earth.

On the other hand

, with the increasing development of technology, learning STEM

subjects

at

school

is more significant than

history

. The majority of

students

choose

science

courses at university

due to

their popularity,

that is

why schools should provide more hours of studying these

subjects

. By giving a basic knowledge of STEM at

school

, teenagers will have a deeper understanding of which undergraduate program they should choose.

Moreover

, STEM courses are more difficult and take more

time

to learn compared to

history

. To give an example, statistics created by the University of Central Asia presented that 60% of upcoming

students

applied for the Computer

Science

program,

while

the other 25% selected the Business and Economics courses and the remaining 15% chose art and

history

. In my opinion, it is essential to spend a higher amount of

time

on

science

and Technology

subjects

during

school

years because it will expand logical thinking and analyzing abilities.

In addition

, if a student is used to solving math and physics problems since childhood, it will be much easier for him to deal with these

subjects

in high

school

and university,

while

history

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subjects

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time

. Take,

for example

, I have studied math and physics at

school

since I was 5 and

this

developed

the

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ability

of thinking

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in a logical way and

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connections between previous

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and

future

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.

Also

,

history

will be more understandable for mature

students

rather than 6-year-old kids. In conclusion, all

school

subjects

are essential for pupils' development and they have to study them in order to be various

as well as

communicative.

However

, I

favor

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the side of spending more

time

on STEM

subjects

rather than

history

.