The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The flow chart shows what typically occurs
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consequence
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of deforestation. When trees are removed, there are four main immediate effects, which
eventully
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eventually
result in flooding, degraded
vegetation
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and a loss of biodiversity. One immediate effect is
soil
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which has been compacted by heavy equipment. The resulting hard, 'backed'
soil
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contributes to the
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runoff
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of
rain water
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rainwater
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and, eventually flooding. Another immediate
consequence
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of logging is a reduction in the number of roots holding the
soil
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together.
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leads to
soil
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erosion.
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consequence
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, the quality and variety of
vegetation
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is compromised. The third immediate effect is burning, both deliberate and
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consequence
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of an increased risk of forest fires. The waste that remains after logging is destroyed and the microorganisms that feed on
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material are lost.
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leads to degraded
vegetation
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. The final immediate
consequence
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is a reduction in the amount of moisture plants return to the air. Because there is less moisture in the air, there is less precipitation and an increased incidence of drought.
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too reduces plant growth and ultimately results in degraded
vegetation
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and a loss of biodiversity.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as a consequence".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consequence, vegetation, soil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduction" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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