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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

#people #waste #home #governaments #requirement #laws
There are few numbers of
people
exist
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who think that the ratio of recycled waste is lower than what it is supposed to be. In the below, I'll depict my idea about
this
 thought. To start with, I agree that not all household
people
 are aware of disposing of their recycling
items
 with proper rules & they don't care about it.
As a result
, they are mixing recycled wastes with their organic composts &
otherwise
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Garbages
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Garbage
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. That's not only creating a bad impact on the environment but
also
 the
government
 to lose a huge sum of money from reusing
the
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recycled waste products. Generally, plastic is the major part of recycling
items
. When it mixes with other garbage it generally gets burned by the waste disposal management. So, when plastics burn they obviously pollute the environment.
Also
,
the
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metal cans or papers create environmental pollution when we fail to recycle them properly.
Secondly
, collecting recycling
items
 and selling them in recycling shops are common habits for homeless
people
. I am not saying that we can help them by putting recycled
items
 correctly,
however
, if they can make some money through selling
it
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, I wouldn't think it would be a really bad thing. At least
this
 passive income will refrain from doing other unethical &
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illegals
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stuff like stealing, smuggling, kidnapping and robbery. I completely agree with the statements that if the
government
 can implement any strict legal policy
people
 can dispose of their Garbage including recycling
items
 properly will encourage
people
 to do it more carefully.
Hence
 it will be beneficial in terms of revenue and save the surroundings from pollution.
Moreover
, the
government
 can introduce an incentive program for those households who maintain the
government
 guidelines for proper garbage disposal at year-end.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste management
  • recycling
  • legal framework
  • responsibility
  • accountability
  • penalties
  • compliance
  • deterrents
  • regulations
  • waste reduction
  • education
  • awareness programs
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